April 2009 - Posts

Eileen Coughlan - 10 Questions

 

 

Eileen draws on her background in psychology and her love of research to develop the plots and characters in her fiction novels. She has written numerous feature articles, a short story, and two mystery novels. Her first novel Dying By Degrees was short-listed for the 2001 Arthur Ellis Award and was a semi-finalist for the 1999 Robertson Davies/Chapters Award. Her second novel is Grizzly Lies and is set in Banff, Alberta. Eileen has worked as a Humane Educator with the SPCA, a freelance writer, a communications consultant, and an English Tutor. She now writes fiction fulltime, teaches creative writing and occasionally tutors university students. She is a member of the Canadian Crime Writer’s Association: www.crimewriterscanada.com

 

#1. Where do you write?

Occasionally, I write in coffee shops, but most days I write on a card table in our bedroom at the foot of our bed. A couple of years ago we renovated the spare room and turned it into an office/writing space for me. It’s lovely: big skylight, floor-to-ceiling windows and great furniture. But for some reason I just can’t write in there, so each morning I set up the cheap card table and write there, then I use the office in the afternoons for business and internet. I think I like our bedroom because it makes me feel like I’m staying at a hotel, where I have only my laptop, a pad of paper and pen with me—so no other distractions. And I like the light in our bedroom.

 

#2. What do you write with/on?

I handwrite with a Pilot H-techpoint liquid ink pen. I type on a five-year-old iBook Mac laptop, which according to the folks at the Mac shop is now considered “vintage” and not worth fixing. I’m still using it.

 

#3. What Font?

Times New Roman 12 point is the font I use most often, though sometimes I will use Apple Chancery for a letter within a manuscript.

 

#4. Do you have a writing schedule?

Yes, I write Monday to Friday mornings between 8:00 am – 1:00 pm. On weekends and holidays, I usually write in the mornings for a couple of hours.

 

#5. Best tip for rewriting?

Take your manuscript somewhere new like a coffee shop, library, hotel lobby, hotel room and read it (with pen in hand) like you are reading it for the first time. Be the editor.

 

#6. Best piece of stylistic or grammar advice?

Teach a writing course. I once taught 65 first-year college students who had failed the writing competency exam. It was a terrifying experience because terms like “subject-verb agreement”, “comma splice”, and “compound-complex sentences” sent me, as well as the students, into a lather. I spent hours preparing for those classes, but I learned more about grammar and editing than I ever would have otherwise. Also having a good style/grammar book such as Diana Hacker’s A Canadian Writer’s Reference on your shelf doesn’t hurt either.

 

#7. Writing ritual?

Since I write in the bedroom, my writing ritual starts with making the bed and tidying up, so the room looks like a freshly made up hotel suite. Then with a coffee, I sit down at my card table and write by hand for a few minutes. Usually I make a list of the things I want to work on that morning and how I will proceed. When I feel I have some direction, I begin.

 

#8. Cure for Writer’s Block?

I talk out the problem with my husband. He is a science guy and tends to think linearly, so he’s great at seeing where I’m needlessly complicating something. I find talking it out with him always helps get me back on track. I also write by hand until something starts to flow.

 

#9. How Do You Capture Ideas?

Most of my ideas come from reading, and the rest are sparked from life experiences, some my own, and some borrowed from other people’s lives. To capture them, I get the idea down on paper by writing quickly by hand.

 

#10. What do you wish you were better at?

Editing my own work, and actually using my style and grammar books; producing more; business and promotion.


To place a hold on Eileen's books, please click on the link below:

Grizzly lies : [a mystery novel] by Coughlan, Eileen Patricia, 1960-

Dying by degrees : an Emily Goodstriker mystery by Coughlan, Eileen Patricia, 1960-

Jen Kunlire - 10 Questions

 

Jen Kunlire, Poet, activist- visionary. Beginning her spoken word path since May 2008, she has already flown to unimaginable heights in such a short time.

Winner of the 2009 Regional CBC Poetry Face off, team member of the 2008 Calgary Slam team. She will make her first festival appearance in the 2009 Calgary international Festival of Spoken Word.

Alongside Sheri-d Wilson, Jen is the Calgary rep for the SpoCan council (Spoken Word Canada) and youth board member of the Alberta’s Writers Guild.

In 2008, Jen formed Humble Line Press/ Word Up, a bi weekly grassroots newspaper showcasing local artwork political satire and poetry.

Her works include "shifting times of today, yesterday and perhaps tomorrow" chapbook, single onion chapbook and compilation CD Onion Soup.

Her performances are often recorded on the Calgaryspokenword.podbeam and soon her audio poem: Still I Rise will be on the CBC Radio One.ca & CBC Poetry Face Off compilation CD.

 1)Where do you write?

I write wherever, whenever, mostly random. Sometimes on the train, in coffee shops, at home or while walking en route to somewhere to write.

 2)What do you write with or on?

I usually keep a note pad with me, alongside a blue pen, sometimes green, depends upon the day. I like to change my writing tools up, all final copies are done on my lappy.

If I have a bolt of fleeting inspiration, I’ll write on anything, a receipt or envelope, haven’t tried the toilet paper trick yet; but I hear good things have been written on toilet paper.

3)What font?

Most times I use the standard font, times New Roman, sometimes 10 point, others 12

With pen and paper I seem to write in between the worlds, my printing is infused with handwriting strokes, so it looks like hand writing but printed letters are scattered throughout my text- sometimes it’s hard to read

 4)Do you have a writing schedule?

It’s here and there, depending upon the project and work schedule. I keep the strategy of writing something every day, to keep the flow going. I enjoy the coffee shop scenario, surrounded  by many creative minds, I tune into my environmental muse.

5)Best tip for rewriting?

Keep rewriting and rewriting and rewriting. To the point of almost insanity, reach that brink then it’s almost fully polished. For me, it takes stepping away from the article, coming back to it with a fresh approach; I may do this many times until it "feels" right.

6) Best piece of grammar or style advice?

I write free verse poetry, aside from set forms, I enjoy making it up as I go. But if I need concrete structure, I use various reference tools from my local library; "On writing well", "the practical stylist", "comma sutra" etc.

7) Writing rituals?

For me, writing is already my personal ritual. I prepare for that by getting some air, having a coffee and I’m off.

8) Cure for writer's block?

I will take a walk, work on another piece altogether then go back to the frustrated block, or pick up a book to read. I find switching the subject, and then reapplying attention back on the first matter helps. As frustrating as writers block is, it’s always good to take a breath away from words and "feel" for a moment.

 9) How do your capture ideas?

 Find what inspires you, for me the sky at certain points of the day; these images invoke a sense of creative output that I apply to my work. Simple moments ignite my flow of thought. Life is already poetry in motion; you just have to utilize your surroundings and experiences. Tune out, to tune in.

 10) What do you wish you were better at?

 Time management! More specifically,  finding the time to manage time.

This April (National Poetry Month) Jen will take part of the Calgary International Spoken Word Festival, in the Story Circle Women’s Song  http://www.calgaryspokenwordfestival.com/event-7.html

Also, Calgary winner of the 2009 CBC Poetry Face off Regional Competition, she will also be competing in the National Competition, stay tuned to http://www.cbc.ca/poetryfaceoff/ for more information about voting.

To see some of her writing:

http://www.calgaryspokenwordfestival.com/postcard-jen.html

http://www.risingwomen.com/mar2008kunlire.htm
 

Exercise Time #1 - Know Your Characters!

 

Whether you are writing a play, a novel, or a short story, it never hurts to know your characters better than you know yourself.  Why?  Because character is plot.  Without good characters, what kind of a story will you tell?  Likely a pretty dull one.  So get to know your characters before you begin to write; live with them; get inside their heads; talk to them!  Or, if an imaginary friend is not your scene, try this simple writing exercise:

1. Write a character sketch.  Focus on the big picture first; what is your character's name?  How old are they?  What do they do?  Where do they live?  What do they look like?  Once you've established the basics, then you can get more personal; what are your character's goals and aspirations?  Favourite things?  Pet peeves?  Who is the love of their life?  You know - the juicy details that together make up the core of their being.

2. Once you've got your character sketch complete, let your character talk - write a monologue from their perspective.  Know who they're talking to, and why - what do they want?  What's stopping them from getting it?  How are they going to overcome the obstacles standing between them and their hearts desire?

3. Finally, let the person (or people) they've been addressing in their monologue talk back.  In other words, write a dialogue.  This will allow you to better understand how your character interacts with the people who inhabit their world, and how they go about getting what they want from those people.

This exercise can be done anywhere, anytime - on your own, or in a group.  The main objective is to get to know your character through writing about them, through them, and with them.  It may surprise you to discover how quickly and profoundly they develop a life of their own.

10 Questions - Sharon Wildwind

 

Sharon is The Calgary Mystery Lady. Originally from the southern United States, she came to Canada a long time ago. As a child, she read adventure stories, science fiction, and mysteries, and knew more about bush pilots than she did about social graces. It took her a while to realize that the guys always got the best adventures and the best lines, a situation she set out to remedy by making up her own stories.

After a couple of real life adventures—one involving being in the U.S. Army and one working in public health in northern Alberta—she realized it was easier to write about adventurous women than be one. Her Vietnam veterans series takes place in the early 1970s. For her three veterans—two women and one man—returning to civilian life is murder. She is also working on an as-yet-unsold series about an American woman who moves to northern Alberta looking for adventure, and boy, does she find it. Waiting in the wings is a stand-alone about a flight nurse, who has to prove she didn’t kill her patient before the police prove that she did.

Sharon also teaches writing and memoir workshops and has a burning ambition to help writers stop using their word processor like a typewriter.  Sharon's website is at http://www.wildwindauthor.com/

 

1) Where do you write?

 

At my computer or dedicated keyboard and under water.

 

I do all of my serious writing on computer, but when I’m stuck or trying to work out a particularly tricky bit, it helps if I get wet. It might be doing the dishes, or going swimming, or even just splashing around in the bathtub, but there’s nothing like water for helping me flesh out ideas.

 

2) What do you write with or on?

 

MacIntosh all the way! I’m on my third or fourth Mac—I’ve lost count—and I tend to use one until it gets old and decrepit and the motherboard crashes, then I go out and find that technology has, once again, galloped so far ahead of me that I have to learn the machine all over again.

 

I also have an Alphasmart [before you ask, the address is http://www.imagemedia.ca/]. Alphie is a dedicated keyboard about the size of a large TV-dinner. All I can do on it is type text. No games. No graphics. No e-mail. No distractions. It’s a terrific machine for keyboarding when away from home or sitting in bed. After I’ve written, I connect it to my computer, which sucks the text out and I’m ready to work with what I’ve written on the big machine.

 

3) What font?

 

I’m so obsessive compulsive about fonts: for the non-fiction, Times New Roman, 12 point for the text and 10 point for footnotes. Arial, 12 or 14 point for titles and headings. For the fiction, Times New Roman, 11 point for the text and 13 point for the chapter titles. The fiction settings are what my publisher requires.

 

I save the font play for my art work, and there I go really crazy.

 

4) Do you have a writing schedule?

 

Right now 10:00 AM to noon, five days out of seven. I’m trying to work back to a slightly longer writing session, say 9:00 AM or even earlier to noon, but lately a lot of the non-fiction stuff, and managing the business has encroached on the writing time. But mornings are definitely my best fiction times.

 

5) Best tip for rewriting?

 

Don’t get hung up on consistency as you do subsequent drafts. If you’ve just decided one of your characters needs to be African-American, and she wasn’t in the previous draft, don’t try to change it in this draft. Go back to the chapter where she first appeared and write a margin note so you can correct it in the next draft.

 

Print what you want to rewrite; read it out loud. The stumbles, the convoluted sentences, the “this is brilliant,” or “this sucks” stand out so much more when I see the words on paper and hear them.

 

6) Best piece of grammar or style advice?

 

What I call the closeness principle. Words that relate to one another should be as close to one another as possible. Somehow, following that rule seems to solve all sorts of sticky grammar problems.

 

Actual sentence from a news story: Doctors in Brazil say they have removed a 15-centimeter fishing spear from the brain of a man who was shot by a friend while diving off the coast of Rio de Janeiro.

 

I don’t know about you, but I’m confused about who was doing what, where, and to whom. Try

 

Doctors in Brazil say they have removed a 15-centimeter fishing spear from a man’s brain. The man and his friend were diving off the coast of Rio de Janeiro when the accident happened. The friend’s spear gun misfired.

 

End first sentence with the man; begin next sentence with the man.

End second sentence with the accident; begin next sentence with details of the accident.

 

Just in case you hate not knowing endings: His doctor says the patient is doing well, and is not likely to suffer any major, lasting damage.

 

7) Writing rituals?

 

Have breakfast and make a large pot of hot tea. Check the weather, our blog site—that’s Poe’s Deadly Daughters [http://poesdeadlydaughters.blogspot.com/]—a couple of inspirational sites, a site about what’s happening with independent bookstores, and my e-mail.

 

Put on my writing hat. It’s a purple felt fedora with a yellow band that says, “Police Line: Do Not Cross.”

 

Turn on music. One of the first things I do when I start a book is assemble a 9-to-12-hour play list of background music. With iTunes I can changed the play list order every day. Sometimes I play it by performer alphabetical order, or by title alphabetical order, or by length of piece, or maybe by how many times I’ve played the pieces before. Each different order suggests new relationships. The trade-off is that by the end of a book I’m so tired of that music that I can’t listen to it for a while.

 

I always try to have an unfinished chapter on the go. If I finished a chapter yesterday, before I stop writing for the day, I open a template for the next chapter and write a couple of sentences about what this new chapter will contain.

 

Sometimes I have no idea what the chapter will contain, so I free form it, jotting down random thoughts, such as, “Last chapter was in a stuffy office; be nice if this chapter is outside. Is it time to bring the grandmother back for a scene? Several previous references to weather expected to get worse. What if torrential rain starts in this chapter while grandmother is in a big park? Where would she run for shelter? Who could she meet in the shelter?”

 

That way, I never have to start the next day with a blank screen.

 

8) Cure for writer's block?

 

Stop reading and writing for at least one full day, sometimes two. That means—if I can get away with it—no writing or reading at all, not even a grocery list. I look at picture books and do art or sew. I listen to music that’s not on my current-book sound track. Sometimes the word part of the brain gets tired; it wants a day off.

 

If I’m still stuck after forty-eight hours, I backtrack one to two chapters. Very often I’ll find that I started down the wrong path and I written myself into a dead-end.

 

If I’m still stuck, I write the most outlandish chapter that will come to mind. It might involve alien invasions, or the characters robbing a bank, or sex between two characters who would never, ever have a sexual encounter. Then I file that chapter somewhere safe and get back to the business at hand.

 

9) How do your capture ideas?

 

I was fortunate to have a writing instructor who said that writers must learn to remember ideas because great notions often come when it isn’t convenient to write them down. He led us through a series of exercises designed to remember not only ideas themselves, but the feelings accompanying the idea, which is often the most important element. Don’t ask me to describe those exercises, this class was 29 years ago, but the legacy is that I seem to be able to remember ideas until I can get to a place to save them.

 

I do carry a small notebook and camera in my purse, which helps me capture an unexpected moment.

 

At home, I use a writing organizing program called PowerStructure, which is 85% helpful and 15% mind-numbingly frustrating, but I am always trying kluges to bend the program to my will, more or less. I’ve written seven books using PowerStructure so it now like a crotchety relative, whom I love, but who also, occasionally, drives me crazy. I also keep a timeline in table format, so that I can sort events by date or by character as the need arises.

 

10) What do you wish you were better at?

 

Being able to do what works in marketing. Even with the Internet and all of the electronic gizmos available, the bedrock of book sales is still face-to-face, word-of-mouth recommendations from one book lover to another. A truly successful marketer needs to be on the road all the time, and that’s neither practical, nor affordable.

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 Some welcome home : an Elizabeth Pepperhawk/Avivah Rosen mystery by Wildwind, Sharon Grant.